Friday, August 7th, 2009

snowlight: (angel)
Sadly, our dear [livejournal.com profile] le_culdesac has had a change in her schedule and is therefore unable to complete the beta as we had hoped. T_T (Thanks for all the work so far chica! It was truly a pleasure to work with you. :DDDD)

In the light of this, [livejournal.com profile] buoy and I are requesting beta assistance from any kind soul who have time and interest to do the following:

★suggest alternative word usage, correct grammar, etc (technical stuff)
★give opinion on characterisation, plot progression, etc
★point out the "???" and "!!!" parts encountered

(As with last time, I am trying to not ask in [livejournal.com profile] kirkspock because I want to keep the whole thing low-profile....)
snowlight: (sougo - petal)
茕蝶:雾风被诈尸了
铃铛:.................................................
茕蝶:车田编剧的风魔后续,果然还是一点长进没有= =
铃铛:orrrrrrzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
茕蝶:风魔的死人全部都……参见冥界篇 - -|||||
铃铛:.......................................................那么至少有一个好消息就是我们可以继续HAPPY地YY龙雾了?= =
茕蝶:就连圣战的那些人也被拿出来卖了……伊达总司啊>_<

风魔小次郎:柳生暗杀帖 )

另外附送关于AB的吐糟:
茕蝶:你说N年后会不会又来一个新*火影忍者
茕蝶:这种事情,前有圣斗士和星座宫,现有网王………………
铃铛:…………………………那也真的是N年以后了…………你看看现在这个……望不到头(?)啊……
茕蝶:其实我觉得快扯完了…………吧?OTZ
铃铛:大概………………?之前谁说的有第三部来着…………………………
茕蝶:从剧情的角度,快图穷匕见了?当然,按照AB这种一场打架要画一两个月的速度………………
铃铛:从AB的角度,快黔驴技穷了……不对,他已经黔驴技穷了!
茕蝶:hohoho
铃铛:你看最近的漫画了?
茕蝶:火影漫画什么的,最讨厌了!
铃铛:喷死~我脑补了无数个版本的这个句子,一瞬间哦

顺便又附送:
黑历史太黑了啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊……………………
大家都欺负我。泪奔。

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Renata Lord/茕蝶。
从LJ搬过来的。
最近在萌Narcos的政客组和Overwatch的麦藏/源藏。
一直都是互攻党。

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