ONTD_ST pics and beta request

[snowlight]

Renata: http://no-detective.livejournal.com/217872.html
ligeia: LOL
Renata "I'm not ashamed to love."
Renata: if only Spock could say that line, oh that would be the day.
ligeia: Oh Kirk
Renata: I swear, he brings out the mania in people.
ligeia: If everyone saw Star Trek and realised how much they wanted to fuck Captain Kirk we would have world peace
Renata: except he'd be Spock's and there still would not be world peace.
ligeia: http://community.livejournal.com/ontd_startrek/496085.html orz
Renata: oh wow...LOOK AT THOSE CHEEKS
Renata: dammit I wanna write wee!Spock and wee!Kirk now
Renata: I DON'T CARE IT'S NOT CANON I WANT TO MAKE IT HAPPEN
ligeia: wee!Spock is criminally adorable

Oh and: We need a beta for Transfiguration.

I am not sure how other people work with their betas, but for this one we are looking for somebody who have time and interest to do the following:
★suggest alternative word usage, correct grammar, etc (technical stuff)
★give opinion on characterisation, plot progression, etc
★point out the "???" and "!!!" parts encountered

I could ask in kirkspock, but I want to keep it low key regarding this fic (while we are still writing it) if at all possible. So...uh....help me, friends list (even though I don't know, like, over half of you)?

Edit: Random half-naked CP picture FTW.

Comments

Beta to your alpha.

[le-culdesac.livejournal.com]

*Puts up hand* My grammar is horrible but apparently I don't suck too badly when it comes to evaluating plot lines and characterisation?

If you need me, just whistle. I'm not always at my PC, but I've got an iPhone now so... Internet and I are rockin' and rollin' together. I answer emails quickly.

(And unfunffunff at junior Spock. I want junior Spock and junior Kirk to experiment together. First kiss kind of thing. How sweet would that be? :@)

Re: Beta to your alpha.

[snowlight.livejournal.com]

Oooh, iPhone! Nifty!

I had thought about asking you (since I actually know you and enjoy your stuff very much), but you seemed very busy these days. Anyway, yeah, if you have the time that would be awesome. ^_^

(I am not sure what's your email address. Kindly send a message to adore(at)thyla(dot)net?

Re: Beta to your alpha.

[le-culdesac.livejournal.com]

Done and done!

[uminohikari.livejournal.com]

I'm pretty good at SPaG betaing (your first point), because I've done it many, many times, but I've only plot betaed a couple times, so, idk. I am offering though~

[snowlight.livejournal.com]

XD

le_culdesac kindly offered already (and the first chapter is already posted, at that!). But if she ever gets busy I'll poke you again. Thanks!

[uminohikari.livejournal.com]

Aha! Totally knew that Must catch up on flist so I can get to this fic..